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Post by Guest Wed Aug 18, 2010 10:20 pm

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A serial killer is on the loose in the city of Orwell. By day, he is a normal man with healthy relationships and well-liked by his peers. But in the cover of darkness he unleashes the unspeakable evil that forces him to prey upon his fellow man. Driven by a tainted artistic passion, he victimizes the dregs of society in order to facilitate a connection with his stunted creativity, making pieces of artwork from their very life essences. As the body toll starts to grow, it is up to the Homicide detectives of the South Orwell Police Squad to find and capture him and put an end to his collection of masterpieces.

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Alright, here is the map. I put on it everything we mentioned and a couple things we didn't. The "Orwell South Police Station" is where our squad is located. "Houses of worship" include Christian churches, Jewish synagogues, Muslim mosques, etc. The orange outline is the "Poor Quarter" where government housing and lower end shops and businesses are. The green outline is the "Art and Museum District" where musicians artists and scholars live, as well as college campuses, museums, art galleries and cafes are situated. And the purple outline is the "Financial District" where the wealthy live and expensive shops and political buildings are located.

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Post by Kail DeWraith Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:34 am

AWESOME Time! Love it!

I think definitely think the more senior detectives (me and Time) should not be paired up together. Even though my character is new to the city of Orwell, he still has experience in investigation and cop work. Anyway, love it! Lets get it started!!
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:46 am

Agreed, Kail and thank you. ^^ So how does "Jensen and Sole" and "Bryce and Martin" sound for partners?

I'll get working on the IC then.

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Post by Buzzwulf Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:47 am

Agreed. You knocked it out of the park, Time. Particularly like the inclusions of churches, personally.

As far as partners go, it looks like either Jensen-Martin and Bryce-Sole or Jensen-Sole and Bryce-Martin. I kind of like the second option, because it mixes not only experience, but gender, and gives us a more well-rounded cast.

And apparently, because you posted while I wrote this, you agree. lolz Very Happy
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Post by Kail DeWraith Thu Aug 19, 2010 12:55 am

Sounds good with me.


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I meant to say "Sounds good to me." Sorry for my shitty grammar tonight.
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 19, 2010 2:55 am

Alright, here it is: Inspired to Murder IC

I've also linked it in the opening post for easy access. ^^


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Post by Kail DeWraith Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:08 am

LOVE IT!
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Post by Guest Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:13 am

Thank you, Kail. I figure we'll all introduce our characters first before we bring in the new case, how's that?

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Post by Buzzwulf Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:32 am

Awesome. That's some great writing right there. I'm gonna wait for Kail before I post anything myself... hope he doesn't mind Very Happy
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Post by Kail DeWraith Thu Aug 19, 2010 3:40 am

I was writing as I waited for Time to finish. So my post is up.
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Post by Buzzwulf Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:09 am

Who am I to break a flow?

Post is up.
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Post by Shekinah Thu Aug 19, 2010 6:13 am

COMPLETELY LATE!!!


But, I still want to say: I'm fine with Jensen-Sole, Bryce-Martin, as it wouldn't even be logical to pair up two women, in my eyes anyway. Not because I think they're weaker, but criminals often do, which can result in a lot of unnecassary and unwanted difficulties.

And nice going with the map, Time! Well, time to think up a post then Wink
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Post by Guest Fri Aug 20, 2010 3:19 am

Awesome posts everyone! We're off to an excellent start! Very Happy

EDIT: Okay, so I made Bryce a little snooty. ^^; Hopefully, just a tiny bit of tension will be good.

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Post by Kail DeWraith Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:53 am

Great posts. I'll do my best to get a post quickly. I just got home from work and I'm beat.
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Post by Kail DeWraith Fri Aug 20, 2010 4:56 pm

I posted, sorry for the delay. Long night last night.
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Post by Shekinah Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:03 pm

Time, do you want us to post according an order, or can we post whenever?

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Post by Guest Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:12 pm

Well, personally, I do prefer a certain order but it doesn't have to be a strict A B C D all the way through. I would like there to be a lot of communication between us because in the group role-plays I've been in the past, the things that always assured failure was nobody talked to each other outside of the role-play and everybody posted whenever they felt like it.

So, the established order is:
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However, if you want to post before it's your "turn", just let everybody know in the OOC what you're doing so we don't end up stepping on each other's toes. Smile

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Post by Shekinah Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:15 pm

Sounds like a plan Very Happy
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Post by Buzzwulf Fri Aug 20, 2010 6:59 pm

Curse you, need to sleep!

I'm working on a post now.
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Post by Guest Fri Aug 20, 2010 7:16 pm

I hear that! Fatigue has destroyed my mornings and the inspired time for me to post is now 1 A.M., lol.

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Post by Buzzwulf Fri Aug 20, 2010 10:55 pm

ok, so here's a funny story:

it's beautiful today; around 80-ish degrees, and barely a cloud in the sky. a slight, warm breeze is stirring in the treetops.

Then my power goes out. Along with the phone lines. whee.

So I'm back, and back to work. I'll get my post up as soon as I can.
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Post by Guest Sat Aug 21, 2010 1:51 am

Excellent post, buzz and Kail! Already, I'm loving the dynamic being set up between the characters.

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Post by Buzzwulf Sat Aug 21, 2010 10:49 am

Nice post, shekinah. Looking forward to replies already! Damn, you guys are great.
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Post by Guest Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:37 am

Indeed! I'm very pleased with everyone's effort. ^^

Alright, a few things. 1. I marked on the map where the bodies were found.

2. I figure we can all have a part in determining victim history and all of that since there are 8 of them. Just a simple explanation of who they were - most likely vagabonds, prostitutes, junkies, etc. - and how they ended up in Orwell. Our detectives are going to be needing to identify these people, but it will be difficult especially if they lived on the streets and don't have any records to go along with them, so I'm not really sure how much or how little we should know about each of them. Should a few of them just be left as John/Jane Does?

Here is what I came up with for the most recent who was killed 2 weeks ago:

Name: Melissa "Avril" Littleton
Gender: female
Age: 18
Bio: She was born in Philadelphia, PA and grew up in a run-down rural neighborhood with her mother in Susquehanna Pennsylvania. Her family was poor and her mother often brought home men who would treat Melissa badly. At the age of 14 she got in with a bad crowd and started doing poorly in school. She has a criminal record for repeated shoplifting, trespassing and breaking and entering.

At the age of 16 she dropped out of highschool and stopped going home. After a year of fighting with her mother, Annie Littleton finally gave up on her daughter and tried to move on with her life. One night while hanging out with her friends on the tracks that ran through their town, her boyfriend died from getting too close as the train was going by. The police searched for Melissa to question her about the incident, but she fled across state lines, going south where she knew she had other family members. She was just looking for a better life and a chance to start over.

Without a cent to her name she hitchhiked south and shoplifted from stores in towns and cities she passed through, often digging through the trash behind restaurants and using gas station bathrooms to wash her hair and body. Little did she know that when she entered a car on the Melbrook Highway, the man driving would be the last kind face she'd ever see.
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Post by Shekinah Sat Aug 21, 2010 11:48 am

Thanks buzzwolf, I'm happy with all as well.

And Time, that sounds good to me.
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Post by Buzzwulf Mon Aug 23, 2010 12:49 am

Sorry I took so much time to get up my next post. I'm all set now.
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Post by Guest Mon Aug 23, 2010 1:03 am

It's okay. ^^ You get some rest - don't wear yourself out.

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Post by Shekinah Mon Aug 23, 2010 6:34 am

Victim number two:

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Name: Jackson Doyle
Gender: Male
Age: 29
Bio: Full-time junk Jackson Doyle was born into a crappy family living just outside of Orwell. His early life consisted out of constant beatings; whether he did something or not. His mom was a full-time alcoholic, as was his father, so how to become an addict was something he had learned when just an infant. He was an only child, so there was no one who could stand up for him. When he was 14, he left his parent's house and ended up living on the street. He started doing drugs on his 15th birthday as a 'friend' gave him some drugs as a birthday present, promising him 'it would take him to higher grounds and release him from all this earthly shit'. At age 29 he would end up in the water of that earthly shit, but he would be released from his horrible life forever. All by the hands of our friendly mister the killer.

Works for you? Very Happy
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Post by Guest Mon Aug 23, 2010 10:47 am

Yes! That's perfect! Smile

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Post by Shekinah Mon Aug 23, 2010 6:02 pm

Victim number 3:

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Name: Jane Doe
Gender: Female
Age: Between 20-25
Bio: Unknown, only available info is that she's been seen on the streets for many years now. Some other homeless people claim that she's been out living on the streets for 5 years now, while others say it's shorter. One person even states that Jane Doe's been on the street ever since she was 15 years old.

Edit: By the way, shouldn't we also add for how long they're dead by now?
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