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Post by Guest Sun Aug 12, 2012 10:04 am

The Spirit of the Game

Welcome to the second official FOG bi-monthly contest everybody! Headbang

The theme for this contest is "The Spirit of the Game". You may write a story about any kind of sport or athletic enterprise, including fictional sports from other works(like Quidditch from Harry Potter as an example) or making up your own if you like. We ask that if you do decide to write a story around a game from a pre-existing work that you use original characters. Canon characters may be mentioned by name but keep the focus on characters that you have created. To give you guys a little more leg room, the word limit is 3,000 words for your piece. Just so you are aware, there will be a penalty in the scores for entries that go above the limit.

This contest will have five reserved slots for entrants. Please reserve your spot in the contest by posting your interest here. Entrants will be recorded in the order that the 'interest' posts were received (i.e. you do not need your entry up yet; however, please do not post interest unless you are planning on submitting an entry). The entrants are listed below:

1. Gadreille - "NWC"
2. Eternal Phoenix
3. Kalon Ordona II - "Spirit of the Game"
4. Christoph
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Everyone who wants to compete thereafter will be on the "reserved entrants" list. These will not be a part of the competition unless one or more of the above entrants does not post their work up by the deadline. If someone does not post by the deadline, one of these pieces will be bumped into the competition (Note: If you do NOT want to compete, and are writing strictly for fun, please denote that in the beginning of your entry). Again, please understand that these limits are to keep the workload of the contest down, so that we may have it more often.

Reserved List:
None yet...


Lastly, if you do not wish to compete, but are interested in judging, please post below. The first two who post interest will be judges for this contest. Anyone who posts thereafter will be offered the judging position on the next contest before any more can sign up.

Volunteer Judges:
1. Sunwolf007
2. Ten

Also, the moderator judging for this contest is Ysopet.

The entries, once completed, should be posted here no later than September 14th, 2012. If your work is not posted by then, you are no longer in the competition. Judges will have until October 12th, 2012 to post their review, and the winner. The winner receives bragging rights, and their work posted in the Archives thread. With any luck, the new contest should be starting a few days thereafter Smile

If anyone has any questions on how this is run, please send anyone on the FOG staff a PM. Let's get the party started! Very Happy[strike]


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Post by Gadreille Mon Aug 13, 2012 11:03 am

I'd like to give this a shot. I know nothing about sports...this is definitely outside my comfort zone.

If this fills, please bump me to the reserved list.
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Post by Guest Mon Aug 13, 2012 7:11 pm

Okie dokie! Will do! Smile Woohoo! A contestant! ^.^

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Post by Eternal Phoenix Mon Aug 13, 2012 8:58 pm

Oh, hell. I can't stay away, regardless of how little time I have for writing these days. I'm in.
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Post by Guest Tue Aug 14, 2012 10:13 am

Thank you, Eternal Phoenix! I cannot wait to see what everybody comes up with. Very Happy

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Post by Gadreille Tue Aug 14, 2012 1:51 pm

I've got a couple of really great ideas... However will I decide?
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Post by Kalon Ordona II Tue Aug 14, 2012 2:14 pm

I'm loving this idea. Sign me up! ^_^
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Post by Guest Tue Aug 14, 2012 5:49 pm

Okay! Just need 2 or 3 more people! Very Happy

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Post by Guest Thu Aug 16, 2012 9:34 am

We'd still like just 2 more people to join if possible! Remember: the longer you wait to join the party, the less time you have to write before the deadline! Very Happy

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Post by Christoph Wed Aug 22, 2012 3:54 am

Oh snap. I've been away too long! I just saw this, but I would definitely like to give it a go, if that's okay.
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Post by Guest Wed Aug 22, 2012 6:11 am

Sure! Welcome back Christoph! Smile

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Post by Gadreille Wed Aug 22, 2012 8:00 pm

Woohoo! Smile
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Post by Lord Revan Wed Aug 22, 2012 10:37 pm

Welcome back Cristoph!
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Post by Kalon Ordona II Fri Aug 24, 2012 11:32 pm

Yaay! Missed, ya, man! ^_^
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Post by Christoph Sat Aug 25, 2012 12:30 am

Aw, thanks guys. :3 Only true friends will hijack a contest thread to welcome you back.
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Post by Kalon Ordona II Sun Sep 02, 2012 4:55 am

What happens if there are fewer than 5 entrants? :/
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Post by Guest Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:08 am

Well, we'll make do, I suppose. I asked that question in the judges forum.

If anybody else would like to enter this, it's not too late! You still have 11 days to the deadline. Smile Cannot wait to see the entries! I'm so excited!

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Post by Kalon Ordona II Thu Sep 13, 2012 3:16 am

Finished my entry a second ago. Just seeing if I can bear to whittle away about 500 words to get it below the limit...
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Post by Gadreille Thu Sep 13, 2012 4:24 pm

Haha. Did you manage?

I am determined to get my entry done tonight. It's not going so well, but I don't want to put up nothing.
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Post by Kalon Ordona II Thu Sep 13, 2012 7:12 pm

Spirit of the Game ~ Kalon's Entry


Word-Count
Code removed for true word-count -- Select and paste in http://www.wordcounttool.com/ -- Should be 2983:

Kalon's Entry
Kalon's Entry, 2,983 words:
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Post by Gadreille Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:12 am

NWC by Gadreille

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Post by Kathryn Lacey Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:16 am

Woot! Two entries from two out of four entrants! There's still time for the other two!

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Post by Gadreille Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:18 am

I hope they pull through! Kalon could use some real competition Very Happy
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Post by Kathryn Lacey Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:19 am

Don't downgrade your own abilities, Gadreille!

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Post by Gadreille Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:22 am

Haha. No, in all honesty, I struggled with every line. But I didn't want to put up nothing, so I rushed through it. I just really wanted to get waterbasketball out there, lol. I hope everyone enjoys it, even if it is rushed.
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Post by Kathryn Lacey Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:25 am

I'm sure these entries will spawn a whole host of people trying new sports - and pretty much killing themselves with yours. =D

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Post by Kalon Ordona II Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:46 am

Pff, honestly I'm totally happy with mine. Feels waaaay too rushed in places, maybe even overall. It was hard whittling it down, but it was a good exercise in wording things succinctly. xD If you see 'twas in there, that's why. Laughing I did end up cutting out significant portions of the first race and a bunch of descriptions. Hopefully people can still picture everything. (I did leave some things vague on purpose, though, just to see what people imagined. ^^)

I even shortened the story itself. What I was originally imagining and planning toward probably would have taken closer to 5,000 words or, who knows, maybe more. -_- I didn't think 3,000 words was so little, after doing the 2,000 word contest.

How come, no matter what we put the limit to, we always go over? :/

There is one thing I am totally happy with, though, and that is the intro. ^_^
And, trust me, if you could see everything in my head about the sport, it really might seem like one of the greatest sports conceivable by denizens of a non-magic fantasy world. xD I'm not sure what we got in the contest lives up to that kind of accolade, but hey, I tried. ^_^
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Post by Guest Sat Sep 15, 2012 9:02 am

I cannot wait to read these entries!

Although, Eternal Phoenix and Christoph, since you did not post anything by the deadline, you have been disqualified. Sad

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Post by Blade Barrier Sat Sep 15, 2012 11:39 am

Although it would have been cool to have 4 entries, having 2 makes it seem more like a cool, epic duel.

I was tempted to join, but I noticed the contest a leeeeetle too late, and refused to enter if I couldn't make something that I felt was 100% delicious.

Oh, and unless all the spots are taken, I'll gladly be a judge for the next one. I was invited.

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Post by Kalon Ordona II Sun Sep 30, 2012 2:06 am

Found 2 errors in mine. One is where it says they watched the other "team". It's supposed to be "teams", plural. And the other is at the end, when the ruler is talking, I forgot a quotation mark " to end his speech. :/
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